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In the Selichot (fifth day of Aseret Yimei Teshuvah, HaPizmon shel Yud Gimel Middot HaRahamim) and in Ne'ila of Yom Kippur, there's the stanza that reads:

The concern is the few middle lines:

מדת הרחמים עלינו התגלגלי

ולפני קונך תחנתנו הפילי

ובעד עמך רחמים שאלי

Which sounds like we're addressing G-d's mercy as separate from G-d, asking her to beseech G-d on our behalf. For those uncomfortable with this concept theologically (or unwilling to give the liturgy some artistic license), what's the best rewording here? The stanza ends with the Biblical וכל ראש לחלי so anything would either have to match that (ending in "lee"); paraphrase the verse differently; or break the rhyme.

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The rewording would need to cover a few lines. Take a look at the seliha again and you will see. –  Yahu Sep 21 '10 at 1:50
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If the text is not meant as artistic license, who amongst our traditional sources would not have a problem with it? –  Yahu Sep 21 '10 at 1:52
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See the sources cited in note 40 here: hebrewbooks.org/pdfpager.aspx?req=32573&st=&pgnum=332 (the Chabad machzor for Yom Kippur). There are indeed respectable opinions on both sides of the issue; those (including of course the original paytan) who defend this wording explain that we are asking the Thirteen Middos to act as a conduit for Hashem's beneficence, but not that we impute any independent powers to them, chas veshalom. –  Alex Sep 21 '10 at 13:50
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Yahu, I like the Google bookclip! Alex, neat idea just taking the jpg! I've added in the Hebrew text here (sans vowels) to make it more searchable; but I think all three ways to do it are good. –  Shalom Sep 21 '10 at 14:17
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A Hebrew Publishing Company machzor of 1926 ("reprinted from the latest and best London edition") has the following:

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Addressing your own soul in the feminine; interesting. (As done in <a href="mechon-mamre.org/p/pt/pt2642.htm">Psalms 42:6</a> and elsewhere.) I knew there had to be some variant texts out there! –  Shalom Sep 21 '10 at 14:14
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Woops. Psalms 42:6, see for instance mechon-mamre.org/p/pt/pt2642.htm –  Shalom Sep 21 '10 at 14:15
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